January 13, 2007
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I pulled out of my driveway and noticed the neighbors chatting at her mailbox. I think they’re both in their early 70s. He’s single and has lived across the street from her and her husband for years. I had the jazz station on and it was honkey-tonk piano. When I realized they were both in their bathrobes, he with no top, I stopped and lowered my window.
“Hey, you two, pretty sexy.” I turned up the music, gyrating to the beat.
It was below freezing but neither acknowledged being half-naked.
“Where’r you goin’?” he asked. His bathrobe was more open than closed and the grey, chest hair almost looked styled.
“I’m going to pick up a recorder.” He gave me a blank look so I held up an imaginary one and wiggled my fingers. She knew what I was talking about. I drove off and they were still yakking. Then the Marian McPartland show came on. Her voice sounds 80 but she plays piano like she’s hot. I thought what is it with these old people? Hell, my mother just came back from snorkeling in the Caribbean with her new boyfriend.
Even for January, 27 is cold here. I was bundled up in my snow hat and mittens, driving across town to meet Margie at her shop. She’s loaning me her tenor. I was thinking the streets looked pretty bleak when I noticed a brilliant colored tree in someone’s yard. The last time I saw it, it looked like all the other trees. But someone had stood out in the freezing cold and tied magenta-colored ribbons all over its bare branches. The shock of color was beautiful but as I thought of the hours it must have taken, for there were as many ribbons as there would have been leaves on this old tree, I thought they must be insane. When I wondered if they did it to make the world a happier place, I laughed out loud. There’s probably another explanation.
After I picked up the recorder I was hungry and, being in a part of town I rarely get to, I went to a cafe I’ve always wanted to try. It shares a name with my ex, and that has deterred me until today. You could sit up at the counter, where it was warm, and watch the cook. She was half my age but twice the cook. I don’t know how she juggled all those breakfast orders, flipping omelettes, shaking homestyle potatoes. She’d give them a shake and then a flip. It was a galley kitchen and she must have had eyes in the back of her head because she did all this while dodging the traffic behind her. Presentation is everything and they had it down. She’d put the fruit in a bowl, which would be obscured by a stack of french toast or hefty blueberry pancakes. On the fruit would go a dollop of Nancy’s Yogurt but what looked like creme anglese would be hidden.. Over that she’d slice bananas and then sprinkle the whole thing with strawberries. I could imagine people’s surprise, dipping into that sinful delight when they expected more yogurt.
I watched her baby some eggs. I thought they were coddled but she called it “basting.” Have you ever heard of this? She heated up the oil and then went over to the hot water and added almost as much. She’d fry the eggs but wouldn’t flip them. At the end she wiped the eggs off with a napkin, pouring out the excess liquid. She was a marvel to watch, using both hands and her stomach or whatever other body part was closest in the maneuver of getting warm plates and hot pans over to the counter. She had saute pans overhead with someone’s wilted spinach resting on the stack and another pan in the oven with sausage on hold. The toast was on the grill and the bacon was keeping warm, dripping through a grate at the edge of the grill. The eggs were cooking on the front burner with another set in back at a lower temp. She did breakfast for four all at the same time. As soon as the plates hit the counter they got garnished and were whisked away by a waiting waitress. Four people in that tiny kitchen moved together in a dance they do each morning.
I’ve been collecting quotes from The Daily Guru, and I went there looking for one which might suit my happy day. I found a line by John Bunyan, which is close enough: “Do you sense the peace and contentment that can come from an appreciation of one’s place in the cosmos?” I know Emily does.
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You spell grey like I do, the British way. I was just reviewing old comments on my other blog and found the first one you made, about Laurie Colwin. I loved the picture of the breakfast dance you painted. Made me want to go out to breakfast at some old diner. I just don’t know anywhere like that around here. Your scenario reminded me of a place I used to go to though. The waitress was about 70 I think and had probably been there since the day it opened. She never asked what you wanted; she told you. The conversation, for lunch, might go “Whaddya have.” (No intonation indicating if was a question.) “A hamburger…” “Potato salad with that.” “Actually I’d like fries.” “And a coke.” “Uh, yeah sure.” When she set the table she threw the silverware across it, sliding it into place from 3 feet away. Food the same. The plates slid across the table from her end down toward you. Sometimes you had to catch them before they slid past and onto your lap. She grumbled her way through the day but I liked her somehow.
There’s just something special about watching competence in action. Whether it’s a cook, or a croupier, or a bricklayer, or a defensive lineman, it’s beautiful to watch someone who knows what he’s doing.
now i’m hungry! i love your descriptive writing!
Here’s the Pru I so love, sharing her view in the most captivating way, that only you seem to have. Mom has a new boyfriend? She’s snorkling in the Carribean?? More details please. Last we knew she was driving when she shouldn’t of been, flipping cops off and driving away from the scene of a wreck. What’s up in her department? While we are at it, what of your dancing?? and you know who?? marilyn
Pru, so good to see you posting. I so enjoy your talent on these pages.
Creative writing, creative creativity–I’m running into it everywhere tonight and it awakens the memory of seeing my grandson’s face as he lay sleeping this morning, seeing the shapes one would draw to translate three dimensions to two. Resketching a coffee cup from a maganzine cover that was (intentionally I’m sure) drawn off perspective. The need to “fix” it. These are things I haven’t thought, felt, allowed into my conciousness in months, approaching years. There’s a niggling little hope inside where it is quiet that God has decided to do for me what I won’t do for myself.
RYC: Draw. Realistic rendering, mostly. Hadn’t touched it in 20 years, then took two drawing classes a few years back at our Art college(RISD). Was amazed to discover the talent was still there, waiting. Did a bunch of drawings for the class, enjoyed myself immensely and was pleased with the final products, and haven’t done a damned thing since!
Aww! I wasn’t expecting that at the end. I was hungrily reading your words and waiting until the end so I could tell you how much I love the food part. “She’d give them a shake and then a flip” was somehow the perfect sentence for me today. Maybe it’s the total movement of it, and the way the shake/flip combo is playful and girly and serious all at the same time.
Again, I’m so glad you’re back.
RYC—the original was a Russian baptism: http://x8d.xanga.com/e34a07f13563254677551/z36644278.jpg [don't know if that link will come up in Firefox
] As for babies…all my nephews & nieces will soon start begatting…just wondering in case they drop a bundle of joy by for me to babysit since they’ll all remember that hey, uncle ER used to watch THEM
i STARTED OUT on recorder…but always had a thing for piano & cello…which is hard for people to fathom when i crank the amp up to 12 and start playing some ear-bleeding Hendrix blues
I have missed your stories so much!!!
I agree with InkStainedFingers I too have so missed your stories…but like any devoted fan, I have been here waiting. Thank the Gods for your return! With every one of your words I walk beside you, sharing your day. Sharing your experience, like we we stopped and chatted with your neighbor (I personally love styled grey chest hair on an older man) And then the cafe` sitting at the counter waiting for my omelet and fruit as I sip my coffee and see all that you do as you take it all in. Sincerely, your words and style invite us, the reader to join you in your world. Thank you!
Blessings,
Ashes
Everyone was rocking out. You are the teenie bopper in that bunch at the start. Well, I’m picturing way sexier than a teenie bopper. You had a tree like a dolled up weeping willow occupying my sight for a time.
And yeah, I’ll admit it. I just put some biscuits in the oven after reading this and before commenting.Breakfast is a treat I do not have regularly but will today! I baste eggs if I fry them at all.It’s the only way I can keep the yolks from breaking. I do not have a gentle flip. She did move in and out of things like nature the way you describe it. The essential place to be.
I love your writing!
So much to see while reading here:)..you don’t need photos you have words.The description of the cook at work makes me want to go to the very same diner…it sounds like the best that could be.I wonder if she is aware that people watch her and are impressed? Who would tie ribbons in a tree in winter/ i am absolutely baffled and very curious. I am so glad your writing here again !
Good to see you writing again!
You know, I thought I commented, but maybe not, which confuses me, but I did like the build here, the path to finding at least “a” if not “the” place in the universe where it all becomes ok.
ryc: could be “kissed” I guess, I didn’t want “made out” because, hmmm, not quite the same – at least to my ear, but I promise I’ll think about it…
I think that was a perfect quote.
It’s obvious some do…including whoever took the time to decorate that tree.
I love you…GFW
ryc: Thanks! I never thought of writing that I did them before but people get asking me about them. I’m really an artist, not a crocodile hunter.
I like reading stories of hale and hearty old people; gives me hope!
Got to love business partners! Yes, Lev, my business partner is going to hold down the fort, which is a good thing since I run most of the office, so this will give him a chance to really take control and understand everything I do. And my hubby has two employees, so they are going to be running the show. Hopefully it will all work out…
I was recently eating breakfast with someone who had ordered coddled eggs. He was a little irritated when it came out with too much grease. He said the eggs were supposed to be coddled in water??? Then there was the persuation that if he wanted water cooked eggs, why not just order them poached. Hhhuummm…I’m going to have to check this out.
Nothing like neighbor watching! I’d forgotten how much I missed your writing! You certainly haven’t lost your touch.
yeah .. I’m still alive, at least. My God, what an insane year. Merry Christmas right back at ya’. Very nice of you.
peace love and macaroni and cheese.
zackfuller